Skilful business writing involves getting
your message across simply and quickly.
This often means writing in a style that
is easily read and understood by a broad
audience.
Yet, writing simply is often difficult
for most of us.
Why? The answer lies in our school education.
We learnt that if we used big words and
complex sentences, we were more likely
to get an 'A' by our English teacher or
University lecturer. The education system
taught us that people who use a broad
range of vocabulary are more intelligent
that the rest of us.
There is nothing wrong with writing beautifully
pieces of prose that feature a stunning
range of vocabulary knowledge. However,
such writing is unsuitable for a business
market.
No business manager has the time to wade
through material that meanders and weaves
before a point is made. They are even
less likely to have time to grab a dictionary
to work out what the writer is trying
to say.
When I used to work as a market research
consultant, I had the impossible task
of trying to write market research reports
that seemed interesting. My immediate
response was to write a report that would
make my University lecturer's proud. Sadly,
my colleagues all felt the same way.
It wasn't until we had a business writing
consultant come in to train us about how
to write at the level of a Year 8 student
that we realised the folly of our ways.
Using my newly found skills of writing
a report using simple English, I proudly
produced my 'easy on the brain' report
to my manager (who missed the writing
class). He told me 'You write like you
talk'. To this day, I still don't know
if he was criticising my talking or writing
ability, but I gathered either way he
wasn't happy.
However, from a communication point of
view, this style of writing is perfect
for getting your message across quickly.
Later on in my career, I worked at a
company that prided itself on its easy
to read reports. While this was true (to
some degree), one of the directors loved
to throw in a difficult word in every
report he wrote to make the marketing
manager reach for his dictionary. He thought
this was really clever and that his clients
would be in awe of his knowledge. I'm
guessing his clients thought he was a
tosser (interestingly, I met an ex-client
years later who told me that when their
company received one of his reports they
would quickly scan it to find the unusual
word and then erupt into hysterical laughter).
Articles that are written to impress
your audience about how clever you are,
do nothing more than distance them. No
matter how learned your market is, they
still prefer to read information that
is easy to digest.
A great way to test whether your writing
is easy to comprehend is to read it out
loud. If someone spoke to you, using those
words, could you instantly understand
what they were getting at or would you
have to really concentrate?
Scripts for marketing videos are no different.
In fact, they need to be extremely simple
in order to quickly grab the attention
of people walking past at a trade show,
for example.
Writing that is heavy on technical terms
and jargon can be a real turn off. The
beauty of a marketing video is that it
uses both pictures and words. The saying
"A picture tells a thousand words" is
a powerful concept with corporate movies.
It means you can actually get away with
saying less, but easily get your message
across, because the pictures do all of
the talking.
Surprisingly, clear writing can be quite
a difficult writing style to master, but
the effort is well rewarded. And look
at the bright side, at least people won't
burst into fits of laughter when they
read your masterpiece.
(c) Marie-Claire Ross 2005. All rights
reserved.
| About The Author
Marie-Claire Ross is one of the
partners of Digicast. Digicast works
with organisations who are not satisfied
that their marketing and training
materials are helping their business
grow. She can be contacted on 0500
800 234 (Australia wide) or at mc@digicast.com.au.
The website is at www.digicast.com.au.
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This article was posted on January
24, 2005